Tuesday, 30 July 2019

New Year's Rap

               New Years Rap

The new year is here, the long-awaited,
How you look at it, it’s in your eyes,
How you see it, it’s in your perspective,
Fireworks shooting up in the sky like a Sparkling Spaceship Screeching Screaming Up In The Sky.

10,9,8,7,6 I get on with life as a Rapper.
I'm a Crazy kinda person.
I like Fireworks and Setting It Off.
I like to start the bomb fire and eat some marshmallows.
But when I start to daydream.
My mind turns straight to 2020 thinking what I'm going to do.

Oh oh oh!

Sometimes I look at myself and I look into my eyes,
I notice the way I think about Drinks with a smile, It feels like I am gonna die so I must drink a lake.
Curved lips I just can't disguise.
But I think it's Fireworks making my life worthwhile.
Why is it so hard for me to decide which I love more?
Fireworks or...
Drinks?

5,4,3,2,1 NEW YEARS! WOOOOOO!
That's what I do for my new year's rap.


4 comments:

  1. hey hunter I like how long and how much details is in your story but maybe next time you could draw a picture.

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  2. It's really good how you used a good Alliteration and Hyperbole. Keep up the good work.

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  3. This is good I really think its good I like your hyperbole because it is very interesting

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  4. I see you have put a lot of time into the poem and have punctuation

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